WWW:

• There's the basis for a very good essay with a fascinating debate regarding the media's role in creating Islamophobia. With a few specific changes/additions, I'm confident you can move this up two grades.

EBI:

• Written English is poor... just not good enough for A2 standard. Did you proofread this? Pay particular attention to topic sentences - keep them short + very clear.
• You need to learn to introduce quotes: crucial skill
• You are lacking research for the top levels: 18 footnotes is half the number you need and 14 entries entries to your bibliography in total is frankly poor.
• Similarly, your referencing is consistently incorrect. It's vital you learn to create accurate bibliography entries then footnote correctly. You also have several quotes/stats not footnoted.
• You are lacking detailed textual analysis. This essay doesn't showcase your media analysis skills.
• The final section on newspaper articles is poor - it doesn't seem to have any link to Hollywood or the rest of the essay. I would consider removing it and instead seriously try improving/developing the previous section on academic research.